Friday, January 21, 2011

Haiku - Betrayal

When one of your own,
Sticks a knife into your back,
The friendship turns black.

Any second chance,
Is an opportunity,
To twist the knife in.
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Harish Iyengaar
21st January, 2011
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11 comments:

  1. ArslanJanuary 21, 2011 at 1:49 PM

    true very true....nice haiku

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  2. HairymanJanuary 21, 2011 at 1:57 PM

    Thanks man! :)

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  3. Balqis DBJJanuary 21, 2011 at 2:21 PM

    How true! I'd stay at bay from back stabbing. As always, you wrote well! :)

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  4. HairymanJanuary 21, 2011 at 8:05 PM

    Thanks balqis. Personal experience speaks the best

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  5. Crystal K.M.January 21, 2011 at 9:55 PM

    So true. I know this from experience! Thanks for sharing.

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  6. ⁂ܓVållῐ ⁂ܓ☺January 22, 2011 at 11:20 AM

    So sad expressive poem.....
    Beautifully written :]

    Happy Blogging!

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  7. HairymanJanuary 22, 2011 at 1:32 PM

    Thanks valli :)

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  8. AnonymousJanuary 26, 2011 at 7:12 AM

    Betrayal is something alien to human being, in fact, we were bestowed with it by the gods.

    That is why when we betray we leave all rights to be given a second chance. It is definitive and final. As death.

    Your sense of Haiku is amazing, Harish! You sure there is not a member from the Rising Sun in your family? :)

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  9. HairymanJanuary 26, 2011 at 10:41 AM

    Haha no man. Thanks though.

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  10. ChitranshiJanuary 31, 2011 at 12:04 PM

    Agreeing to the last line...yes it's difficult to believe again..!!!

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  11. HairymanFebruary 3, 2011 at 12:33 AM

    Thanks :)

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