This blog characterizes various visions or thoughts which have come across during the course of life. It may be just a random thought, an observed fact or just a mere day dream but which will be memorable for life.
Tuesday, March 8, 2011
Haiku - The Fine Line
Abstinence - the way,
Avoidance of karmic depths,
Free thyself from them.
In debt we persist,
Walking on a fine thin line, Will you tip over?
------------------------------- Harish Iyengaar 8th March, 2011
tip over? yes! if I can savour, Savour ! the moment.. savour , to save! The fine line that divides the winds on both the sides , the very path you traverse, You negotiate .. to reach the other end, Just to write a “perfect” verse.. :))
the haiku and the picture fit perfectly! Awesome!
ReplyDeleteExcellent haiku! :)
ReplyDeletetip over?
ReplyDeleteyes! if I can savour,
Savour ! the moment.. savour , to save!
The fine line that divides the winds on both the sides ,
the very path you traverse,
You negotiate .. to reach the other end,
Just to write a “perfect” verse.. :))
Thanks arslan :)
ReplyDeleteBrilliant ari :) You surpass all limits of excellent poetry :)
ReplyDeletelove it!!!!
ReplyDeleteThanks stephaine!
ReplyDeleteThis is brilliant.
ReplyDeleteThanks Kathy :)
ReplyDeleteBeautiful :)
ReplyDeleteExcellenyt wording! You live it up- Harish! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks valli :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Moon :)
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